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rejected.
again i am turned away,
but i can’t help but feel
that you pushed me today

your blind.
i was trying to assist,
but again im ignored
and you try to resist

i cry
out for help,
but no one’s around
to hear my yelp

you see,
that im all alone,
and i fall
desperate and trying to make myself known.

but its hard
to make yourself heard
when the person you’re talking to
is being absurd.

you know?
it takes two to talk
but when i turn to you,
you always continue to walk.

im alone
even in my own home,
and my heart struggles to beat.
im encased in this dome.
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blahness.... people anger me.
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~simplyjessxx:iconsimplyjessxx: May 10, 2008, 7:18:26 PM
I know the feeling.
Lovely.
:D

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I dare you to [Click it.]
~Karmaneko:iconKarmaneko: May 10, 2008, 7:18:59 PM
Mmmmm...This is amazing. It's true on so many levels...I have someone that treats me like this..
You did a wonderful job of illustrating it.

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Feeling let down doesn't go away as the people pass by...
It's when someone stops to help that you decide to get up.

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~moon-daughter:iconmoon-daughter: May 10, 2008, 7:20:24 PM
thanks:D

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ive never felt so complete
and its almost as if this was for me
so now ive found my patch of sunlight
and i sit content and dazed
and i let the sun warm my face
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~moon-daughter:iconmoon-daughter: May 10, 2008, 7:21:07 PM
thank you! this has just been building for me lately... it just had to come out...

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ive never felt so complete
and its almost as if this was for me
so now ive found my patch of sunlight
and i sit content and dazed
and i let the sun warm my face
~
~simplyjessxx:iconsimplyjessxx: May 10, 2008, 7:21:40 PM
No problem.
Really well written.

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Jess and a half.
I dare you to [Click it.]
~Karmaneko:iconKarmaneko: May 10, 2008, 7:29:09 PM
I know what that's like...You did a great job doing it though. ^_^

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Feeling let down doesn't go away as the people pass by...
It's when someone stops to help that you decide to get up.

Check out the Kingdom Hearts club! <<[link] >>
~moon-daughter:iconmoon-daughter: May 10, 2008, 7:35:00 PM
thanks. :D and thank you SO MUCH for the fav!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ive never felt so complete
and its almost as if this was for me
so now ive found my patch of sunlight
and i sit content and dazed
and i let the sun warm my face
~
~Karmaneko:iconKarmaneko: May 10, 2008, 7:48:51 PM
There's no reason not too - it's wonderful.

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Feeling let down doesn't go away as the people pass by...
It's when someone stops to help that you decide to get up.

Check out the Kingdom Hearts club! <<[link] >>
~moon-daughter:iconmoon-daughter: May 11, 2008, 6:11:57 PM
thank you *blush*

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ive never felt so complete
and its almost as if this was for me
so now ive found my patch of sunlight
and i sit content and dazed
and i let the sun warm my face
~